Collaborative Story A Starry Night

When we last left off... (Read the entire preceding post in this storyline, or follow this plot from the beginning.)

Among the many stars in the universe there was one that, unlike most, was unnatural. It was made of metal and held several secrets that only certain species were aware of. This star was not a happy inhabited place like the beloved Popstar, no no. This star was nothing less than a concentration camp made for Capsule J's. Ever since the robotic Capsule J2's appeared they started rounding up the Capsule J's, taking their jet packs, and sending them to this star. Most that had heard of this believed that the Capsule J2's thought they were superior and that this was what fueled their motives, but nobody was sure. What was sure was that nearly all Capsule J's were on this horrible star, and only a few resistances remained.

The Mechanical PrisonAuthor #16 - 9:02am Dec 22nd, 2009

This J2's dubbed this star, "Machine Planet: Mekkai." Colloquially, it was referred to as Mecheye. This awful planet had been holding Capsule J's (Or "J1's" as they were often called) for years now, harnessing their combined power to fuel the artificial star.

As the J1's toiled away, their two-eyed brethren spread from planet to planet, inhabiting the regions once populated by their predecessors. Meanwhile, the rest of the galaxy remained blissfully unaware of Mecheye's true purpose. Those who were more informed kept quiet; no one wanted to ignite the J2's wrath.

Then came that decisive night. The night that marked the tenth anniversary of the Capsule J's imprisonment.

Beyond its anniversarial relevance, the night didn't seem all that significant. It was the same routine for the captured J1's. To one Capsule J, however, this was the most important night of his life. This night would have a lasting impact on not only him, but all of the J1's that were imprisoned in Mecheye's core. The outcome of this night would either lead to his freedom or his early demise.

You see, it was on this night that the first Capsule J escaped.

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Re: The Mechanical PrisonAuthor #46 - 6:36am Dec 31st, 2009

This Capsule J was dubbed "J1-H.E.L.P.E.R" by his kidnappers. The reason was simple he was a H.E.L.P.E.R., or A Helpful energized-being of Life Prior to Entitys with Rights. The title "Entitys with Rights" belonged to the J2s. He had being collecting peices of metal for who knows how long. He made a replica jet pack out of it.

After escaping his cell, along with his cellmate, dubbed "J-Cellmate" by the J2s, he put his plan into action. He gave the replica jetpack to his cellmate. They found the main area of the prison wardens. There were five total all J2. Cellmate, put the replica on, while J1 snuck behind the foes.

Once, the cellmate walked in, the five wardens rushed toward him. However, amidst the chaos, J-Helper found one has left there jetpacks. He put it on, and just then realized this jetpack was his own. His freind laughed.

"Hehe, one... of... us... escaped... How do you... know I wasn't... here... to tell... you..." He said.

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Last Updated - December 17th, 2009